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GRE奖学金的申请

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很多同学都想知道申请GRE奖学金的流程是什么样的,原本美嘉导师想给同学们介绍一下流程,可是后来发现重要的是要写出完美的GRE奖学金申请书,所以小编就给同学们找来了GRE奖学金申请的范文,好的GRE奖学金申请文章在申请奖学金过程中所起的作用远超过托福和GRE。下面就是导师为大家准备的范文:


Growing up in a modest village in China,I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology;people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking water and use ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisions and personal computers。 But when my father gave me an old radio to play with,I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraption and see what inside made such interesting sounds。Sitting on the floor with a confused grin,surrounded by wires and metal, I looked up at my father and asked where the noises were。。。(有删节)


美嘉导师表示,合理地阐述了申请者学习电子工程的动机,学习动机是评审委员非常看中的。同时,GRE奖学金评审委员读了这段文字,会使他们沉浸在对童年往事的美好回忆里,借此打动他们的心。


另外一篇修改过的文章开头用诗一般的语言写道(有删节):


I first read this paragraph from Madame Curie as a 14-year-old child, and I still remember how wonderful I felt。 I remember thinking,"What esteemed men they were!How hard they worked!" As I grew older,this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity。I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart,kindling a love of science,and encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world。


结尾呼应了开头,阐述了作者为什么要去美国读书:


I never forgot my adolescent idol,Maria Curie。As I re-read the book,another passage leaped out:"She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries。。Maria took the train from Warsaw to Paris,the intellectual Mecca。"


For me,the intellectual Mecca is the United States。。。。 I hope to continue my study and research,as detailed below。One day,I hope to find the pure esthetics of biology and reach its luminous summits。


美嘉导师提示:给同学们准备的GRE奖学金申请范文,同学们觉得怎么样?是不是对你有点启发呢,不是每个人都得当科学家才有办法得奖学金,同学们要学习的是写作的技巧,怎么才能准确的找到评审委员的软肋,只要找到,你就成功了,同学们加油!

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